Hi all

[yoda29369]

hi all!!!! been playing uo since 1999 on europa now back to that brilliant addiction again and a family later still...but now on the free shards.....ideas I have but knowledge a slight lack of but always willing to learn and share....

[Toptwo]

hi all!!!! been playing uo since 1999 on europa now back to that brilliant addiction again and a family later still...but now on the free shards.....ideas I have but knowledge a slight lack of but always willing to learn and share....

  It would seem your intro is lacking as much as your scripting knowledge. You might try adding to it, making it a more interesting read. Try reading some of the stickied intros, then give it another whirl.

[Outlaw Josey Wales]

wheres the beef?  No beef in this introduction

[Masscre]

Like my other friends here said we will need a lot more filler and info for your intro or we can not open the front door.

[SolidSnake]

Think of us the starving children in Sally Struther's old commercials and your intro is our food. (am I dating myself??)

[Endless Night]

I wanted to vote HI .. but couldnt find that option 

[Masscre]

Think of us the starving children in Sally Struther's old commercials and your intro is our food. (am I dating myself??)

[Outlaw Josey Wales]

nice masscre hehe good one

[Tidus]

i read it as if they said it all in one breath and ran away..worked well for me...